The alpha's wife
"Good short story. Thanks 🙋♀️"
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"Good short story. Thanks 🙋♀️"
"you are an amazing writer and I hope you make more amazing stories!"
"Excellent book! I really enjoyed the storyline. I wasn't able to stop reading until I got to the end. Loved the ending! You are a very talented writer."
"Let me know what you think?"
"I love this book, so far so good."
"Too many gramatical errors and I wish the story was good but it lacked details… everything was written as if in third person and being narrated by someone else so it was distracting "
"This was a nice short story. However, using this as a rough draft, with some editing and adding on could be an amazing story. It has so much potential. As is, its a little to quick to have great detail allowing you to get to know and like the characters. Can be confusing at times with lack of detail. But if you added to it, it could be amazing! "
"I did enjoy this book, though sections of it happen so quickly. Your descriptions of this are brilliant. "
"Nice work and plot"