Needs lots of work.

"The plot could work if it was fleshed out a lot more. There needs to be more description, less spelling mistakes and run ons. There also needs to be continuity. It seems very choppy in the writing and plot of the story. I'm very intrigued by this story because I am a Dracula Untold fan, but it needs work. If things are tweaked right, it could turn out to be a good story. "