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The pain of being a human.

"Damian this is amazing. You really captured what it's like to be human and have this consciousness, and just the need to know how and why. When you really stop to think about it, it's really quite terrifying. I've started having more existential crises as I've aged and it's painful because the innocence and naivety I had about the world is kinda gone, now it's just fear and resentment. But like you said, it is nice to breathe air into my lungs and just have that experience. We're all really here together and have this chance to be on Earth for the little time we have. I think those moments of happiness are the only thing keeping us from doom. Just wanting to live. I wish we didn't have to worry so much about trivial things. Again, I loved this!"

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