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"such an amazing story . loved it and may i say it very relatable on my side . great work"

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Simply bad

"The prose is, first and foremost, atrocious. It would mitigate my dissapointment a bit if I knew the writer was not a native English speaker. The writing is clunky and words are often used incorrectly. Sentence by sentence, it is all but incoherent. Yet, even through this verbal miasma, I can detect a pretentiousness which really puts me off my appetite. "

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