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What is your opinion?

A lil disappointed

"I started reading this book on FB. I was hoping it was on here. It's a GREAT start to a book. Those other sites, however, charge over $100 to read an entire book in some cases. That's not realistic for most of us. I would LOVE to be able to just buy this book outright and read it instead of paying for small chapters. "

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Was good

"Was being good and would have loved to finish it but sadly the story on DeerFiction wants 200+ USD to read the complete book and that’s just not feasible. Wish you luck on success it was being amazing."

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The Alpha and I

"Want to see what happens"

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The Alpha and I

"A fast and interesting read, amazing plot and memorable characters that I thoroughly enjoyed! It was easy to relate to the emotions throughout the story adventure!"

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Huffu iyfii

"A good novel"

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Awesome

"Honestly best story very engaging never a dull moment from start to finish would like to read more of your stories very skillfully done the only thing I wish for is to know if it was a boy or girl and is there gonna be a second book to follow this one because it defo needs it many thanks for the amazing read"

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The Alpha And I

"This was an amazing story 🤩🤩🤩"

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Very good

"Well done for first time writing. It was really enjoyable...sad Paul had to die but it was short and cute....Well done, continue the great work .👏"

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The Alpha and I

"Great story! Continue reaching for the stars. "

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The Alpha and I

"Very fast paced book. I liked the content. Should have contained more about the death of Cici’s father, or at least his capture and told what his punishment would be. A few spelling and grammatical errors throughout."

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The aloha and i

"Awesome read thank you for sharing your story with me "

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The Alpha and I

"Love the story and for a start this is pretty good. The grammar etc is not an issue for me. I have read far worse stories and this one I find that it needs more details. The legend part felt like it was not a story that anyone would say to be a legend. The healing process details also missing. The feelings of the alpha could have been more. Maybe also a part about Cici while healing and her wolf. The wolfs of both missed their character. The title alone doesn't follow the storyline. I think the author can update this and add to Galatea! I cried and laught so yes this is a great story! Keep writing!"

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The alpha and I

"Love story"

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The alpha and I

"Wonderful short story loved it ❤ "

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short good story

"short good story"

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perfect!!

"I loved the plot the whole way through I also loved how it ended. you did the whole story perfectly!"

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The Alpha and I

"Nice, easy read. I love a story where the characters are likeable, this one definitely has a few great characters!"

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Great job

"It is entertainament"

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The Alpha and I

"Good story"

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Mmmmmm

"Honestly Sorry it was a good read it was slightly boring! at some parts But I enjoyed reading it so definitely recommend it"

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