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Amazingggggg😁😁😁

"This books awesom! Thanks for writing it your creativity really is so great 💋💋💋💋🤩"

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Engaging

"Very easily had me hooked. Wasnt as predictable as most stories as of late have been on Inkitt. I really hope you make this into a serious I would live to know more!"

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Excellent

"Really great spin on the olympian god/goddess tales. This book is quite refreshing and I look forward to the second part in the series! "

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Great story!

"This was such a great story. You have an amazing writing style! I look forward to reading any more stories you post! Well done author! "

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Loving this story

"I really love this story. It keeps you glued to the story waiting for more. The way the author has you craving for more"

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Cursed. Scarlet

"Really great story really enjoyed the twist and turns to it. "

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Great read

"One of the few books that I might rea d again in the future. I enjoyed it very much. I am drawn to books that avoid gendered stereotypes and this story was successful in this respect. There was one particular moment in the narrative that Scarlet referred to her situation as 'a psychologists wet dream'. Just one example of the humour that appealed to me. There were a couple of sections where the story moved between past and present that I found confusing but this did not detract from the overall enjoyment of the story. I am sure that a good edit can move this lovely story to another level. Thank you for the smiles and pleasure that this book gave."

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Nice plot, needs improvement in writing style

"The plot is nice, the author should try and rewrite this one. There are instances of contradiction within the story. Try filtering those out. Some parts are vague and seem unrelated to the story. "

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