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Potter's sister

"Nice, unpredictable,n full of suspense..can give better review if u let me read it properly "

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Good so far

"It follows the line of the story but confusing when nothing ever was mentioned about Harry having a twin sister. "

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Love it!!!

"I really loved the all the detail. For example, with the part of Lily’s screaming she heard. Remus’s connection with Leila being a Potter. The description of how the dementor made her feel. Completely and 100% perfect. There are some influencers, that I think would absolutely love this, I would recommend it to them for sure. "

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Potter?

"Its nice and the plot so far is intriguing. "

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I love it

"I've love the story so far, the plot is absolutely interesting and I'm excited to read it further "

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Potter? Review

" I liked because of how detailed and how much time or effort was seemed to be put into it. Can wait to read more"

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Nice

"I think it is very interesting that I am coming like alone."

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Requires more editing and sorting out to make okay sense but overall great

"When reading, I couldnt exacting place where the OC was and what she was doing. The flow if the story has some bumps but overall its great for a start!😊"

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