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Taken to be his

"Beautiful story loved it definitely recommend "

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Taken To Be His

"So happy that Zamir put up her family and gave them what they needed to survive. I would love to read about Marco and Sofia's lives now. Do u think that would happen? Also, wasn't there another brother of Zamir? What happened with him?"

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Taken to be his

"Well done a good feel book. Amazing work keep it up 👏👏👏👏👏👏"

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Love this so much

"Amazing stoyr, love it alot"

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Taken to be his

"Omg!! Loved it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Great story!

"I loved this story! This author never disappoints!"

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Really nice

"Good I was surprised at first then you turn the plot in a very thriller way…. I lost it when Marco kidnapped Ava fewwww Thanks author "

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Taken to be his

"I liked it. Team Zamir all the way! 🙌🏼 However the development of their relationship was a bit quick. Taken from the side of the road, thinking you would be a sex slave, having your virginity taken the same day and within a very short time it’s love. Yeah, I think that would take any girl a while to develop feelings and act upon them. Other than that very happy you didn’t put Marco into that relationship. I’m all for twins sharing, but I just couldn’t feel the chemistry between them, like I could with her and Zamir. 👍🏼❤️"

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taken to be his

"love the plot of this story"

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Taken to be his

"What a beautiful story. As much as I dreaded for Ava when she was taken by Zamir, it all worked out in the end. The love they shared. Their obsticals, even with his brothers meddling, they overcame and endured"

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I really love the story !

"The entire contest was wonderful 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"

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Taken to be his

"Absolutely amazing book completely loved it ❤"

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Awesome story

"Love this book wish there was a part two"

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Taken to be his

"OMG 😱 I really loved this story and your a great writer 👍👍👏👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Taken to be his

"Thank you very nice "

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Taken To Be His

"I absolutely loved this story, it was just the best combination of the man turning into this ball of fluff because of this one mysterious woman. It was just soo appealing to read about how the gruffest guy in El Salvador turned into a mess when he found the love of his life. And how much it was of a mystery after all of the “conflicts” showed up. Also the imagery of wealth and mansions was just overwhelming and myself as a reader loved every single sentence."

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Great job

"I loved this story so much. I kinda wish it turned out a bit different but all in all it was great."

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Taken to be his

"Intriguing read. The story is fun although a bit superficial. Great read nonetheless"

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Good

"Spicy love story 🥰"

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Taken to be his

"Nice story. Loved Reading it"

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