Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

Keep it as is

"I love it where is the ending "

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Idk

"Nxkdkeken rkdixnendoxmmeis did Amazing "

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Part two

"I liked the storyline to start,but I did not like the ending. I would like to see a part two."

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Good so far. Bit grammar mistakes here and there.. Need improvement

"Good so far. Bit grammar mistakes here and there.. Need improvement "

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Irresistible

"I need to know what happenes"

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Inevitable

"I need more. Great story❣️❣️❣️"

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inevitable

"plz bring part 2 or rest of the story!!! it was so good and entrancing!!!1"

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Fsir reading

"Liked it so far… A little too slow for my liking but kept me bound and wanting more"

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Inevitable

"Please update soon. I have been waiting for a few months now."

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I don't know

"Needs better editing. Georgia seems very immature sometimes, but she is supposed to be 17. Why not hang out with her own friends instead of hiding in her room when the guys are over?"

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Some grammatical and spelling errors. Otherwise a good read

"Too many men - it’s far fetched. "

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