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Apples and Tangerines

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Summary

Poems from the depths of Honey Valley

Genre
Poetry,Other
Author
Naomi
Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Dresses

They sway in the moonlight

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A beautiful array of colors

Pinks and blues and yellows

I could get lost in those dresses

There’s something so beautiful about them

The way they move, the way they dance

Glass heals, Translucent fabric pilled together

Gentles steps and side steps, twirls and twists

I used to look at the dancing women

In their dresses, I dreamed of those dresses.

To be one of those women swaying.

Beautiful. Stunning. Mesmerizing.

Right?


Are you enjoying my ongoing story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, Naomi

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