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"Its needed more chapters in it I would recommend it to anyone who like stuff like this I gave it the rating because it is a good book"

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Great story 👏

"You're a great writer, I loved the story "

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Best so far

"First book I read ang not getting bored in the half of it"

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Freaking awesome

"Love it! Storyline is awesome "

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Great!

"Me rooting for Damien and lelia to get back together 😭"

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Enjoying the danger

"What is the name of the second book?"

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Enjoying the Danger

"Wonderful 👏❤ writer, great characters and action packed, fast paced story. Engrossing. "

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Love and danger

"Beautifully written and easy to follow, with enough twists and turns to keep your readers tied to the story. Thank you and I can't wait for the next book"

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Enjoying the danger

"Excellent story "

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Enjoying the Danger

"Travis is not a bad guy but I'm heartbroken Damien couldn't be faithful"

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Awesome book

"Love u Book, hat me hooked all the way. Thank you for your work 👏👍😘"

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Soooo good!

"This is a great story! I do cringe a bit with the roughness but love Leilas story."

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Awesome!!

"This one is really good. Really love how the story goes. Really amazing.."

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Enjoying the Danger!

"I love that! I love that the main character is a strong woman and not only a beautiful Barbie clinging on a rich man’s purse!"

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Enjoying the Danger

"🤩 soooo goood left me wanting more.💕"

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Enjoying the Danger

"The author is a great storyteller. This story needs slight proofreading but over-all a very good book with intriguing characters and suspenseful plot.👍👍"

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Enjoying the danger

"I don't normally read the mafia type of Storylines. This Story was off the charts. Congratulations 💯❤️🌟"

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cool

"i really like your story Nice personality and character "

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i like it

"I like very much this book. I liked more that the characters are adults who know what they are and what they want, especially a strong female character, with clear ideas, women like that are always needed in stories. thanks for that. On the other hand, I have to say that the lovers conflict is very repetitive, an ex always appears who threatens the protagonist to have sex? The one who is the right hand of the mafia and torturer? He doesn't know how to handle tricks? 🙄"

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Enjoying the danger

"Loved part 1. Great work"

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