Chapter 1
The hero of our story is Venn. He is the young and handsome son of a mayor, Mr.Charles.His father is a famous and kind gentleman. Venn is born like the opposite version of his father. He is a totally cold character because he was born by himself. After his mom's death, he studied in boarding all these 15 years, he has 3 best friends from his college, among all of them Venn has a different personality, Now he completed his studies and president of a gaming company. So let us come to present times,
On a Friday, college reunion day, Afterparty 4 of them decide to get together in a bar.
Long time guys, let's cheer for our future, Joan holds his glass towards them. Venn How is Your company going? Sorry, I didn't get time to visit you last month rayes said sadly and pour him drinks.it's going well and it's alright, you know me very well. Venn said. That's the relief they started talking......
Edward introduces them to a gym and practice court he going to all of them. Guys let's meet in malta Arts court, I want a new start same as before we started our college, let's meet there every Saturday, it's good for bodybuilding and other curriculum activities. Edward stops And Venn said: I'm not interested. hey!!! Don't be like that, Just try rayes Added. They try hard to convince Venn. After a long talk, he said ok I let check if it's not good I will stop. All nod their head for him.
Next Saturday in Malta Arts court. Hey you guys on time, where is Venn. rayes said. He must be here somewhere, he never comes late. Yeah look he is inside, Joan said☺️.
After few minutes they saw a group of the team practicing dance, about 3girls, and 7 boys look like a music band team. Edward said woah they look cool don't they?... without looking venn replied: Annoying..... that creates an awkward moment there. Wow that's girl dance steps are so cool,rayes added👌. One girl in that team saw them
I can see you have a great idea for a story. my best suggestion would be, if English is not your first language have a friend or someone you know who speaks it fluently edit your chapters for you. Doing this will help you a lot 🙂
Hello! I came across your story and I have to say, it’s really impressive. The concept is strong and the storytelling keeps the reader hooked, which is exactly what makes it perfect for a comic adaptation. I could easily imagine the scenes illustrated panel by panel. I was curious if you’ve ever thought about turning it into a comic format. If you don’t already have one, I’d be very interested in discussing how we could bring it to life in comic form.
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