Rollercoaster

"This story definitely went from 0 to 100 real quick, but I definitely enjoyed it. The descriptions were great and it painted a good picture of what was happening. Although, the descriptions did tend to get a bit repetitive towards the end of the story. The middle part of the story seemed a bit rushed as if there was a though there but wasn't fleshed out all the way. I definitely liked the idea and the way that things were implied that the reader should know and it fit well with the writing. It's definitely a short read but it doesn't lack much and is a good short story to help pass the time! Overall, I really enjoyed it. "