What is your opinion?
Very good start!
"It's a really good start to the story. I can see this is going to be very dramatic and quite a bit of tragedy. There's a few technical things you can work on but so far it's really good. Keep on writing!"
"It's a really good start to the story. I can see this is going to be very dramatic and quite a bit of tragedy. There's a few technical things you can work on but so far it's really good. Keep on writing!"