The Mafia King Is Mine
The mafia king is mine

"Wow!! That was ALOT!!!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Althea Grant

41 chapters read

My mafia king is mine

"It was just so interesting and amazing love it"

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cackiesmith

94 chapters read

The Mafia King is Mine

"I think I liked this story better than all the rest! Great job!"

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Amanda

94 chapters read

Loving this version

"Some ups and downs about Kevin that passed me off also what Luke did. But aside from that all good. Loving it!!!"

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lapatrick74

89 chapters read

The Mafia King Is Mine

"This was a very good story. I hope there will be sequels with each brother having their own stories and finding true love😉Just a suggestion. 💗💗"

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This book was so good

"I really loved this book . I love twist and turns it had and the ending."

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EmiCat

82 chapters read

The mafia king is mine

"It was really good in the beginning then it just got really confusing. I didn’t really like the ending but if you liked it good for you. It just wasn’t for me. Enjoy!"

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Mafia love

"Great story"

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Karly’s life

"Sounds very unreal and detailed which is not necessary! The writing style too is boring"

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Annelin Viste

94 chapters read

Strange

"A bit Strange, to much happenings. Al in al a ok story."

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Umm

"I need to be honest I felt a lot was rushed and some dragged on. I wanted to read more but I honestly couldn't. Some parts in this story didn't seem realistic enough. Like they knew eachother since college and it took her 2 weeks to get over her husband. I think you're a good writer. I just felt I couldn't read past chapter 37. "

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