The mafia king is mine
"Wow!! That was ALOT!!!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
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"Wow!! That was ALOT!!!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
"It was just so interesting and amazing love it"
"I think I liked this story better than all the rest! Great job!"
"Some ups and downs about Kevin that passed me off also what Luke did. But aside from that all good. Loving it!!!"
"This was a very good story. I hope there will be sequels with each brother having their own stories and finding true love😉Just a suggestion. 💗💗"
"I really loved this book . I love twist and turns it had and the ending."
"It was really good in the beginning then it just got really confusing. I didn’t really like the ending but if you liked it good for you. It just wasn’t for me. Enjoy!"
"Great story"
"Sounds very unreal and detailed which is not necessary! The writing style too is boring"
"A bit Strange, to much happenings. Al in al a ok story."
"I need to be honest I felt a lot was rushed and some dragged on. I wanted to read more but I honestly couldn't. Some parts in this story didn't seem realistic enough. Like they knew eachother since college and it took her 2 weeks to get over her husband. I think you're a good writer. I just felt I couldn't read past chapter 37. "