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fuck

"Too short but nice "

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Tasteful dessert

"Overall I enjoyed reading the book..hope they will be a book 2 sometime"

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Reread Wattpad 🌠🌠🌠🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤 frrend

"Yasssshhhhhhhh 🌠🌠🌠🌠"

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Nice story but maybe a slower burn may help the plot and maybe the grammar

"It's a good story"

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Virgin

"The language is terrible, it need reediitng and rework, it can be better "

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Tasteless Writing

"Horrible!!!! No grammar, no punctuation, no sentence structure. Every chapter is a big run on sentence. The reader has to figure out whose thoughts and whose words belong to who."

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Dire

"The language, grammar and well, everything is all so bad. Couldn't read past the second page."

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Tasteful Dessert

"The person... as I won't say author . Should be band from even writing their name let alone any type of story. I can not believe how bad this was . I read to the bitter, bitter end only to see just how bad it could get. And it didn't disappoint.. absolutely frigging nonsense"

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