What is your opinion?
Tracey
"I love this story is there any more chapters I want to when they give birth to the pups"
Pain
"Good. But wery tuf. I Was in tears"
Omega
"I like it. It's sexy and it keeps me interested"
The Omega
"This story is beautifully written and heart wrenching. I want to do to those what they have done to the innocent. I have cried, smiled,rejoiced,cringed and now hopeful for all their futures that they find the love they deserve as well as respect."
Awesome
"I love this book so far it's so good I can't wait for the next update"
The omega
"Great book can not wait "
Omega.
"Poor omegas,glad theyhave Angel amd Benji to find and protect them.xx"
😍😍😍
"Love it can’t wait to finish! "
THE OMEGA
"The plot is one of a kind. The anticipation to wait for new chapters are getting higher and higher, at least for me. I love both Angel and Benji. But I cannot stop imagine Benji as a child although he is already 18 years old😂😂 Angel to my imagination is a fragile girl that her mates have to protect with all their might. Looking forward for the next chapters and other books from the author. I love you author for making this book exist. 😘"
The Omega
"Okay...... I just finished reading this story and I would say that this story put me through a "buffet" of emotions from straight up captivated, confused, queasy, to down right nasty and cringey. Since I know that this type of story is not going to be everyone's cup-o-tea I am going to try and stay neutral and focus solely on story structure here. I think that the storyline has great potential, but it needs a lot of refinement. The main characters need more of a backstory and there needs to be more energy devoted to the development of their character's and their relationship. The story felt rushed in some parts (important parts) and over detailed in others (not so important parts). I feel that their childhood trauma was glossed over, which is crucial to how they behave and interact now. I was surprised at how quickly Benji and Angel were willing to hand over their trust and well-being to others (mates). I would think that they wouldn't be so willing to be separated from each other, and definitely don't think that Angel should be so willing to forgive (unless she has literally been broken into being ultra submissive). I would like to see more relationship development instead of eating, sleeping, and f**king. On a side note...... if this was listed as an erotic story, then eating. sleeping, and f**king would be right on cue. Anyway.... I am not a writer, but this story does have some very interesting angles to it (omegas are female/male, omegas bring a healthy well-being to packs, healing powers, stability etc....) Like I said, this story has great potential. I know that you have the skill to write well based on your very detailed account of the many ways Amanda was tortured over several chapters. Amanda's torture was a huge distraction to the story as a whole. I get she needed to be punished, but Benji and Angel needed to strengthen their bonds with their mates, mourn their loses, and find closure."
The Omega
"The story is good, different from other mate stories. Also new spin on the whole Omega thing. Would definitely say worth a read"
Interesting but can be improved
"I think this storyteller has potential but needs to show the story more and tell it less. The characters need to fleshed out with more personality. Benji is great as a character name but to close to his evil fathers name of Alpha Ben. One of their names need to change. A Luna who was forcibly mated by her true mate’s killer would not name the son she loves after that evil Alpha-hole."
