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Kudos for writing such a masterpiece

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"This story insightfully illustrates the cruel nature of mankind. Fortunately the main character is redeemed through a humiliating personal experience. I recommend reading this story because it teaches the importance of compassion for all of Gods creatures. Karma and the Golden Rule apply to every situation in life."

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Chills

"A quick read that will stay with you throughout the day. Take the time, and be ready to reflect on the forces that move you."

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A good Make You Think

"I liked the premise of this (one of the reasons I clicked on it). The overall story is quite straightforward which is fair for the style. I would have liked perhaps a little more effectiveness with words that would allow for better flow. Parts felt quite 'stated' like a recording of events, instead of an actual flow of story. A good analogy, but it could definitely use a bit more flavour."

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