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An amazing storyboard

"I enjoyed the story, captivated by rescue of the children. Can't wait to read more parts of the story. I would definitely recommend to my daughter. Rating is because of the beautiful. Unique story "

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Honored Queen- Part III

"I absolutely loved this whole story. I came to this platform originally because I heard the 3rd book was here. The story is well written, moves at a great pace, and has many interesting findings. I love how she finds her brother and how she is allowed to choose her mate when she is ready. Loved it all, thank you."

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I am invested now

"With the volume of books I have read over a lifetime, there is little that surprises me anymore. But this book has managed to catch me a few times, which I really appreciate. I also like the multiple POVs (outside the mmc and fmc), and the relationship dynamics that have been built so far. The technical writing could be better, but this is a first run. I know the ones posted on Galatea are better. Also, I wish I had known that it wasn't complete before I started reading. I don't like loose ends so I usually wait for a series to be completed. However, I can't say that I regret reading up to now (ch. 46) and where the plot sits does not make me want to poke my eyes out with the waiting. Looking forward to the rest."

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more of it would be great

"I reakly enjoyed this story, would have loved to read some more. Like returning to the capital...what about the other kids...aso.."

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Honored Queen

"Great story line! Lots of grammatical errors though. "

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Needs editing

"I know this is a first draft so it hasn’t been polished yet. Based on the quality of the first two books on Galatea, I know the finished product will be fantastic."

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Story teller

"M. Watts your story telling ability is awesome. Your characters come alive on the pages of your book. I eagerly await more. Would love to know what happens with Kael, Lira, Thomas, the twins and Tess. Please don't give up on this wonderful artistic ability. The world needs talent like this to keep us going."

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Beloved Runt

"I loved everything about this book. "

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Waiting for more

"I love the story. I can’t wait for more. I am almost sorry I read thru it so fast but I just couldn’t stop. "

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Excellent story

"Loved this book. The first two were excellent as well. Highly recommended read."

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Great

"Easy to read. Great characters. "

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Honored Queen Part III

"This series was beautifully written. Crafted from all of the raw emotions, it is a roller coster that is worth the ride. Would love to see this adapted in to a show. Can't wait till the next part in the series!"

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Honored Queen

"I absolutely love this story . It is wonderful and wish there would be more of it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Mifanwyn

"This part of the story now concerning found little children gnaws at my innermost self.i think wat Miss Bee has created is dazzling and sometimes very sad but she also manages to show and acknowlede bravery in children. That is a gift and I thank the author for her creativity."

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Wish it didn't end

"What a fab novel. I truly didn't want it ti end "

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Excellent writing, good premise

"The author has an excellent sense of storytelling. Their writing skills are passable but not extraordinary. I would say they have a knack for describing emotions but not scenery. I can feel the characters emotions but don't always have enough detail to picture where they are or what they look like. The premise and plot are very imaginative, there are a few technical plot holes, but nothing major. Proofreading and editing are fairly good. The author could use a good thesaurus and dictionary to help with incorrect words or spellings and to cut down on repetitive phrasing. Overall, an excellent book and series. "

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Beloved runt 2

"Very entertaining and captivating storyline "

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Honored Queen lll

"This story is riveting. It keeps you wanting more. I read all 3 books and I want more. It's that good.Can't wait for the next chapters or book."

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Great writing

"Emotionally connected with the character. "

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So far so good

"I like that it has something different regarding the bond between the wolf and human. Not just your average wolf shifter book. "

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