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Grims beginning

"Love everything so far"

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I have never been so entranced by a book!

"I love reading and this is a story line I don’t see much personally. I really enjoy the story so far and have been binging and staying up late/reading every work break lol. This is a book I’d want to own a paper copy of for my personal library!"

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Insane

"The book itself is insanely awesome with so much twists and turns it has anyone hooked in just 2 chapters. Only you don't start a great hit like this and just stop ok it's really annoying. More people than you think are waiting for an update so don't make is loose hope and update. Just try to read the whole book and get your flow back and if it doesn't work delete the book and don't deceive more people "

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Would read again

"Really good over all, I'd definitely read again. The thing is though when you reference something more than 2 to 3 times and then not tell the reader what you're referencing until several chapters later it can get very frustrating as a reader at least ik for me it was. I ended up being more confused and caused me to wonder if I missed something previously which personally made me frustrated. But other than that this is a very good read and I hope you update soon or that there is a sequel. There was good character development and I love the plot. Also I love how the main character (spoiler) is a woman loving woman. "

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Grim beginnings

"Very good story"

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Fainter

"Good plot few spelling mistakes but a good read want to know how it ends"

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Super impressed!!

"This is actually fantastic. Sucked me right in and I can ot stop reading. Was not expecting it to be THIS good. Really good job, honestly. I'm incredibly impressed."

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Love this story

"This story has so many twists, I nearly have whiplash! I can't put it down!"

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Grim beginnings

"I have enjoyed reading this book however there are quite a few spelling mistakes, overall a great read "

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Great !!

"I loved everything "

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Stay Mitchell

"I haven't read but I saw what so all 5s"

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Bab

"Awesome when is the next update?? I'M HOOKED"

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Grim beginnings

"Awesome story love to read more...I am hooked"

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Awesome

"I loved everything about this I wish I could finish it"

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Interesting

"This book has captivated me. Though there are some parts I'm yet to understand, like how Abby and Fins brother could see the supernatural. "

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Grim Beginnings

"I love the content and the fact that the chapters are long."

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impresive

"if you can keep up this potential you can do anything! and another thing GET TI PUPLISHED!!!!!!!!!"

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Fantastic

"Its a great story. I don't usually like mystery, but this one is very well written. "

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Grim Beginnings

"Wow...this is a fantastic story! I am looking forward to the rest of this book. There is more to come I hope. Thank You Dragonflame91 for an excellent story with vivid characters."

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Liked It

"Good plot, clear diction. I was blown away. It's a sensational book the world should read"

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