Prologue
Mabel jumped up and down, “We did it! We defeated bill!”
I looked around a little nervously, “Yeah. I guess we did!”
Grunkle Ford frowned at me suspiciously, “Why so down kid?”
I felt a shiver go down my spine, “Well there isn’t any chance he could come back, right?”
Ford chuckled, “That’s what your worried about?” He lifted me up on his shoulder, “There is absolutely no way that he will ever EVER be back. And Even then it would take him years to regain his powers. But that’s impossible.”
I breathed out a sigh of relief, “W-well that’s good to know but I would still feel better if we had proof.”
“Kid the only proof would be that statue and thanks to something we call gravity, even that will be destroyed.”
I smiled weakly, “That’s good...” I trusted him, but something didn’t feel quite right.
Bills POV
Those pines will never know what hit them... I opened my eye. I was floating in what seemed like a void. Everything from wierdmagedon floated around me slowly. “Bill! Bill Cipher.” I turned to see a glowing woman with golden eyes and white hair.
I stood up as much as I could in empty air, “Well hello! How you doing sweet heart. Looking mighty fine I must say.” She glared at me with Icey cold eyes and I sighed, “Yeah your right your not my type either. So what’s the deal.”
“The deal, “She said bitterly, “Is you are on the brink of being destroyed and we have been trying to get rid of you for the past 7 hours. The deal is that you pulled some trick before all this happening. The deal is that your still alive!” Her hair erupted into flames in her rage, “Do you have any idea how long this will take to sort out?! The files ill have to report? The paperwork I have to do?!”
I rolled my eye, “Ok so? Some sort of punishment waiting for me here?”
Her eyes blazed, “No I don’t think so. I think being completely human will serve you right.”
I laughed, “That’s a really good one but uh... Id rather be destroyed.”
She batted her eyes sweetly, “Don’t worry you can keep your powers.”
I looked her up and down, “What’s the catch?”
“The catch is you wont get them back until you find something worth while. No more games.”
“What if I cant find something worth while or find one and cant keep it or hmmm lets say loose it?”
She shrugged, “Then you can keep the powers you earned and go on with life. Its not my fault if you get stuck in one spot.”
I thought about it, “Fine deal.”
I held out my hand but she smiled wickedly, “Good luck then.” She snapped her fingers and.... the last thing i remember was thinking, Watch out world. Here I come again.









OOO THIS IS REALLY GOOD
Wow, I love how you switched perspectives between the characters it really brings the story to life Bill’s conversation with the mysterious woman was so intense. How did you come up with her powers and the worthwhile catch for Bill?