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Fall In Line

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Summary

Perfect. That is what Society looks for. Life in Solaris is never, has never, and probably will never be easy. As a civilization divided by Sectors, your social status determines your position. Higher rank means higher Sector and greater chance of not hating the life you live. Or at least that was how it used to be. In effort to create the perfect race, the leaders or Solaris created the Cleansing. It was essentially a reprograming, or a "treatment", to rid Society of imperfections. And it grew to become the thing that Elara Melior dreaded most. When Lara was little, her brother went for his Cleansing and didn't come back. A few years later she began presenting with certain powerful "symptoms" that could get her killed. From then on, she made a plan to get out of Sector Four, and eventually Solaris, for good. But when she runs into a cheeky boy who would later become a best friend, and a band of rebels with a handsome but secretive soldier as their leader, her plans might change. Faced with the choice of taking the opportunity to leave a life of running and face the unknown outside the walls, or join the Rebellion to take down the people who tortured her and took her brother. Will she take the leap or will she fall in line? **contains swearing and mild violence**

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6yrs ago
Chapters
21
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Fall In Line

Perfect. That is what Society looks for.

Life in Solaris is never, has never, and probably will never be easy. As a civilization divided by Sector, you social status determines your position. Higher rank means higher Sector and greater chance of not hating the life you live. Or at least that was how it used to be.

In effort to create the Perfect race, the leaders of Solaris created the Cleansing. It was essentially a process that rid society of it’s imperfections with a reprograming of the brain, and it grew to become the thing that Lara Melior dreaded.

When she was little, her brother went for his Cleansing and didn’t come back. A few years later she began presenting with certain abilities that could get her killed. From then on, she made a plan to get out of Sector Four, and eventually Solaris, for good. But when she runs into a cheeky boy who would later become a best friend, and a band of rebels with a handsome but secretive soldier as their leader, her plans might change.

Faced with the choice of taking the opportunity to leave and face the unknown outside the walls, or join the Rebellion and possibly take down the people who took her brother.

Will she take the leap or will she fall in line?

**contains swearing and mild violence**

author’s note:

Hey everyone! This is my second(ish) book on Wattpad, but one of many that I’ve written in my so called “writing career”. There’s going to be a ton of twists and turns along the way, as well as complicated plots and futuristic technologies. So bear with me :)

All rights are reserved for this story so please don’t copy or plagiarize any of my work. Additionally, I am only human and I do make grammatical errors, this is a fact that I am aware of so don’t feel obligated to point them all out. I’d also like to say keep the angry comments to a minimum (not that it really matters). This story is my writing and any decisions I make are up to me. Hope you enjoy!

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