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"I really don't want to explain my reasons for rating this book the way I did, but since I have to."

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Erotica Worth Taking Notes From

"Discover true, heartfelt, and super sexy love in this short erotica story! Wonderful author, Michael, expresses his love for the woman he eventually marries through the experience of their first time making love. You're guaranteed to feel the intense passion and love he writes through his poetic writing style, which carries along the plot nicely. Please add this to your reading list now! "

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