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"Often I get caught up in grammatical errors and spelling errors in stories. This one had a few, but nothing overwhelming and the story was interesting enough to keep me coming back for new chapters. I like that Jake never lost his independence and actually became stronger in his character arc. All in all, this is well written and engaging. "

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"Another extremely well-written story. I was hesitant at first, since this one contains dubious consent at the start, which isn't my usual cup of tea. However, the characters are so well-developed, and layered, that I quickly grew attached to them."

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