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Summary

This is a horror story about a doll...

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1- Moving to a new house

‘Zack!’, said mom. ‘ZACK! WHERE ARE YOU!’ ‘Here! In the bedroom’ ′ Wake up! ′ ′ Okay ‘, TANG! The clock strung to 10, Yeah, that is the time I wake up on holidays. I got ready and came down the stairs. ’ Hey sonny, there’s GOOD NEWS, go in the kitchen!′ Said dad. Walking down the long stairs, I met Susan, my little sister going up. ′ There’s SAD NEWS ′ She wept. Now, what is this nonsense! My dad says GOOD NEWS, but Susan says BAD NEWS, I do not understand anything.

‘Hey Zack dear, it is a great surprise! Mom said when I came into the kitchen. ’ Come on, tell me FAST! ′ I said getting impatient. ′ We are moving to a new house! ′ My heart stopped. I felt cold, and my mom could see this. ′ What, aren’t you happy?′ She said, getting a bit worried. I did not want to make my mum SAD so I said this, ′ Um...n-no, it w-was a su-surprise! ′ ′ Oh okay! ′ Said my mother, feeling better. I swiped away in case my mother saw my worried, sad face again.

The breakfast was laid on the table, but I was in no mood to eat it. After I called every friend of mine and told them that I was moving, I went to watch my favorite show, THE MONSTERS.

But I was interrupted by dad in the middle of when the monsters are about to defeat the HUMANS. ′ Come and pack your suitcases, we will move in an HOUR ′ I was like, please let me just finish this episode but dad was like, no, not at all!

Now I’m in the new house, ( which is WAY BIGGER than the old one ) which you can call a MANSION. Susan’s tears vanished away when she saw how MAGNIFICENT and MODERN this place was. In fact, I was a little happy too when I saw how COMFORTABLE and how cool the GADGETS were.

But one thing EVERYBODY did not like was that there was no other HOUSE in sight! Dad went to buy things for the house, mom was preparing Lunch, Susan was EXPLORING and I was reading a HORROR book.

Susan came into my room with a paper. She told me to read it while she bought SOMETHING. I started to read it: 5-floors, on floor 1- main door, kitchen, Hall with a T-V... I dozed away.

I woke up with a CREAKING sound. It was my sister. ′ Here is a DOLL ′ she said and FLASHED away. Now how can I describe it to you? Ok, it had two ponytails, RED CHEEKS, her skin was somewhat white and she wore a frock. The doll was smiling WICKEDLY with eyes ON ME all the time.

I had no time to mess up with her so I put her under my bed. I went to the top floor and saw a door leading to the music room. I went in and expected to see a piano and a drum, but, there were so many instruments I could not count them!

I rushed where mom was and said that I will sleep on the floor-5. ′ Are you sure you wanna sleep there hon? If you want you can sleep in there from tomorrow ′ I was happy. Did I ever mention I was MAD behind instruments?

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