Authors Note

"Hey, This is me the author here. Asking you to please tear apart my work. I mean, be nice about it, but if you read it and you see something amiss. Particularly if the book shows cultural disrespect., or if there are any plotholes. This is my practice arena before I try to get an agent so, anything you guys have to offer in way of critique is great. If you want to tell me in the comments what your predictions or things in the book you like, that would be great."