She tried...
"Where to start....
1. Getting married to one guy only to divorce him and discover you were actually married to his brother? Really? How on earth do you think this got thru without a valid signature??
2. And then the annulment "failed"? Even if the marriage was "vaild," i doubt that after 3 years, they would be able to annul anything. It would more than likely have to be divorced, but on that part, I could be wrong...
3. OH, I'm not actually married to you but your brother? Your parents didn't think that he would be loyal, so they switched the paperwork before it was submitted without telling anyone? Yeah, that totally makes sense... Well, OK, we have always liked each other, but OK, sure, why not? I'll move in with you even though you just left for 3 months after having a tantrum because you didn't want to give me anytime to process your brother, who I was meant to be in love with, cheating on me.
4. Do you really, honest to God, think that a trained Dr couldn't tell the difference between a 5.5 month old feotus and an 8.5 month old feotus?? If they can't, then they DEFINITELY should not be practising medicine.
5. Oh no, I thought I was pregnant with my current "husbands" baby, but I was apparently further along, meaning it was my ex's baby... I better run away because he might think I cheated on him even though we wouldn't have been together at the time of conception if I was really 8.5 months pregnant.
6. I've run away from everyone, had a miscarriage today but sure I'll accept a date from a stranger. Oh wait reading my texts from my (traceable) phone, they don't blame me (duh!), I should go home. Sorry new neighbour of 3 hours my really name is .... and I have to go home now, now you know my whole life story please tell him I'm sorry, even though i could have just said 'i can't stay sorry, send brother my regrets' as it's none of their business...
7. Dr - " I'm so sorry, I'm quitting my job"
Family - "no please don't, we really want your uneducated arse looking after our next pregnancies and emergency medical procedures."
Really....?? REALLY????
8. Dr - "Here I'm doing a home delivery of your babies dead body in a box so you can bury it at home even though this is completely illegal "
9. This random envelope shows up at my business with photos of my hubby HUGGING another female, better check this out because it couldn't be another person causing drama, right? Oh it turned out to be your highschool ex gf and it was completely innocent, oh thank God, because I mean I HUG normally means sex right?
10. Wait, it was your secretary who took the photos? Because she was jealous? And wants you all to herself? Oh right, because you had sex with her before you moved to Seattle while you were having your tantrum because i was emotional over my husband cheating. Yep, got it.
11. Oh hubby, remember how I was having my mental break down from losing whoevers baby, and ran away? Well I accepted a date from some random guy i met within like an hour of arriving at this little town i stopped in... let's bring him back 6 hours and set him up with your highschool ex girlfriend who just showed up from nowhere because more drama was needed. But it's OK, she's not in love with my husband.
12. Oh hubby, it turns out I damaged my uterus when I had a miscarriage and can't have more kids... WAIT father in law to the rescue. I'll have specialists flown in today to look at you... oh wow look at that, even though specialist are booked out months, even years in advance they can not only fit in a consultation straight away but also operate that same week!
13. Hold up. Wait! What? Mum is a twin?????? And she was really kidnapped 4 years ago and it was her twin in her place? So it was aunty who died and mum is actually alive?? Yep OK, sounds legit, not going to ask any questions and just accept it
14. We operated, and even thou you haven't healed yet and as such there wouldn't be a way to see if the damage was fixed just yet, we will deem the surgery a success and tell you it worked before you have really even woken up.
15. Oh wait! what? WHIPLASH much! Your now telling me I'm not married to the brother but i am actually married to my ex so I do need that divorce??? All because the "friend" in the courts got caught doing god knows what?? But wait, why would they have ever had a wedding licence for me and ex of it was switched?? How were both lodged?? Are you just trying to cause drama mummy and daddy in law??? Maybe I should see this marriage certificate!
16. Wow that divorce went through quick!! Lucky us. Not even 24 hours after signing. Efficient.
This is just what I remember, there are definitely more instances when i stopped and went "huh, really?" throughout the story.
The story has a bit of promise but the author needs to slow down and do a bit of research in to the storyline. Make it more believable for the reader, because otherwise we just sit here and think "not a chance this can happen in real life."
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