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To good 👍 and emotional

"I like your overlapping and confusing emotional feeling and internal war in mind. But I want it to explore more. "

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Rumi Khan: Clouds

"I love this story! It is great, has fantasy, and relatable characters! The chapter names are wonderful!"

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Clouds

"Great job! I can not wait for new chapter!! :)"

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