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Amazing story!!!!

"I enjoyed the first and second book."

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The one's who saved use

"Love reading this book I found it hard to put down it really pull you in "

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I LOVE IT

"OMGOMGOMGOMG I LOVE LOVE LOOOVE THIS! ITS SOOOOOO GOOD! THERE NEEDS TO BE A THIRD BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMG I LOVE LOVE LOOOOVE IT!"

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Beautifully written

"Cant stop reading once I started. The story line draws to the heart bringing tears and smiles as the story progresses. Will be re-reading both books again in the near future."

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The Russo family, Italian Mafia

"I loved the story about the Mafia Family, there has been some mistakes in spelling and grammar, but the book still kept your interest."

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The ones who failed us

"This book is exciting alm the way "

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AMAZING

"Incredible story❣️ Since I've always hooked up in romance novels, I never thought I'd come to love this story since the sole focus of this story is between brothers and sister. But it proved me wrong. It's one of the best story I've read till now 😘. The BEST and my MOST FAVORITE character would be TEDDY❤️. MOST AMAZING BROTHER IN THE WORLD. The way he take care of his sister, I really wish I could have a brother like him. Each and every character has me hooked up. Such an amazing story author. 💕💕"

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Loved everything about this!!

"This was one of the two best books I have ever read on Inkit...the other beeing 'The ones who failed us' :)"

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The Ones who Saves Us

"Absolutely loving this, hope there is an update soon!!! Can’t wait to find out how what will happen next❤️😊❤️😊"

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Fantastic Story hi

"I enjoy just about everything concerning this story. Great story line and a wonderful read. The one thing I dislike, Ava has the Italian Mafia for family, but keep actually like they can't take care of her and themselves."

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To author

"I fell in love with this book all over again. The last time I read it, two years ago, I struggled to fully understand what Avalee Russo, the main character, was going through. But now that I'm the same age she was, I finally grasp the depth of her suffering. It reminds me that even when we think our lives are hard, someone else might be longing for what we have—our family, our bonds, everything we cherish. I want to write a book and publish it on this platform one day, and I hope to capture the same connection that Avalee shares with her brothers—Alessandro, Leo, Elijha, Emilio, Matteo, Theodore "Teddy," and their father. This entire story is about family and the importance of being able to rely on each other, no matter what. It’s a reminder that people do heal; they just need to know they are loved, no matter their struggles. I was moved to tears reading the last chapters. I wish there was a continuation or a book that explores Theodore "Teddy" Russo’s life without his sister by his side. To the author—if you happen to read this, I want you to know that you are an amazing storyteller. If you published this book, I guarantee that others would fall in love with it just like I did. I can’t express enough how grateful I am to have read such a beautiful story. If I could, I would sell my soul just to experience it all again."

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Amazing

"Omg the ending, I'm crying 😢. I loved this story, it was the best thing to just chill and relax to. I found it entertaining and really enjoyable. It has an extremely powerful moral and its something I'd find myself reading over and over again (especially the epilogue, idk it just seemed really powerful to me). I love it and I can't wait to read more stories like this. 🖤 <3 Good luck"

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Survival

"Reality a good story"

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The ones who saved us

"Such a great book to read …both books were. Needs a little editing like adding missing words and taking out the extra word. But overall I couldn’t put the book down it sucked me into read the next chapter (and book). well done."

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