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Very good so far

"I love that all supernatural beings are in this and it makes for a wider genre. The emotions are a roller coaster ride so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the plot plays out "

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Rejected ? Deuces! A gay werewolf novel

"I really enjoyed this book and would like the name of the second book to start reading it."

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Rejected? deuces

"So good can’t wait for the next chapter. I’ve enjoyed the book so far can’t wait for more. So glad that things got better for Carson and these who loved him"

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Rejected Dueces

"Can't wait for the next book!!!!!!"

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Rejected

"I liked it all. The plot people of different lives come together "

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Rejected

"Such a great book !!!"

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It was so romantic

"I need a follow up story to see how these all ends common"

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This book is so worth reading and it's has a very good grammar and plot

"I don't dislike anything in this book and I recommend it to literally everyone who likes myths and fiction"

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Story line is good

"Story line is good"

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What the

"Again what the where is the rest of the story "

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Fine

"Fine good book a little bit too much substance like eight mates but makes a good read rest is all good"

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Rejected? Deuces! A Gay Werewolf Novella

"As I really love the idea of the Story, there are too many hurdles, the Story isn't fluent, some things just don't ad up. One the Names of the good and Bad are mixed up, adding to the confusion. This book would be great, but needs a big workover, especially with the start. Great intentions, great ideas, please eddit!!!"

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Needs editing

"This had potential to be better. There was quite a few times, some of the events were questionable. So they didn't add up to the overall plot. First: why the alpha/luna did nothing to prevent the pack abuse? Thats the point of them being leaders in the first place. Instead they ended up being celebrated for their kindness? Why 8 mates and his own fathers/brothers? Seemed too excessive and wasn't explained enough The ending, was just thrown in. So that was confusing."

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Rejected

"This book to me was conflicting. I know most would go and support the main lead but I going to have to go with Reagan on this one. Like Even thought he was horrible to Carson I understand where his coming from. Who would what to be with someone they don't like. Second Carson chose to rejected Reagan too. Third how the hell did Carson know everybody in the supernatural world. Why did his parents send him way when he is a prince. Why didn't the alpha just order his pack not to beat up him up.The alpha nor the luna told to him or the others to stop. And why were they so angry when they could have stop him.Why did the moon goddess just cut of Reagan and Carson mating because they rejected each other.Why did the moon goddess pair Carson and Reagan in the first place if she knew this would happen. Why was Reagan blamed for rejecting him. Why did Carson even go into a coma after 3 to 5 years and not right after he turned human? Why did he go into a coma at all? Like if he turned human that means he had no connection to the supernatural and even then wouldn't the mate system be cut off from him and Reagan? Instead of letting Reagan be there for 3 to 5 years why they just kick him out, or turn him human or even turn him into a girl( I don't know) or make him into a omega. But I think you could have given Reagan a better ending or both characters. "

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Rejected Deuces!

"Confusing and boring"

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