What is your opinion?
GOOD JOB
"This scene was so tender and emotionally charged really pulled at my heartstrings. 💔 The reunion felt raw and intimate, with just the right balance of dialogue and inner emotion. The line “Well, if I am not, then this is heaven” was especially beautiful. A bit of trimming in the narration could tighten the flow, but overall, it’s a heartfelt and moving moment that sticks with you. 🌟 I got some ideas in my mind which cn enhance it further more so if you're open for discussion and also about the upcoming stories do let me know"
Reality
"Nice story, there was a difficulty in the beginning to figure out the person's POV, but with careful reading, it doesn't pose an issue. Overall, good read... recommended."
Reality
"Love the story. Sometimes I was confused about those P. O. V’s. But overall the book os great. 😍"
Reality
"Amazing book. Its actually my first book about alien stuff and i was totally hooked till tge end.!"
Looking for more!
"Yes! This is what I've been looking for. I need more like this."
Reality
"Amazing story. I really loved it. Just in some points writing confused me with the POV... Took some time to realise who is up at beginning of the story. Keep up great work. "
Awesome
"I love this story💕"
Reality
"I started reading alien stories and this story caught my attention but it didn't meet my full expectation. I will say that it has potential if the plot was a little more well developed. There where sometimes that I did get lost and others where I thought is was rushed or underdevelop and for me it distracted me but I did love it from what was given it was a good book to read."
So good
"This book was amazingly writien I loved it "
Good storyline
"Wish the storyline was written more thoroughly. Readers have to work too hard to connect the dots between characters and story. Writer leaves out crucial words and skips around in timeline without notice. Also would be nice if POV in the beginning of story was announced. It was confusing. I like the ideas behind the story though. Writer has good imagination and it would be a great book if certain aspects were corrected. "
