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Legendary

"Wow, I loved the first 2 chapters, it was a very strong start with the characters and the setting of the story. I am really intrigued to see where this goes next. I cannot wait for the next chapters to be released! Awesome job!"

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I Love it!

"I love this! it's not often I use those words to describe my feelings toward something, but this is simply great! Bions friend is filled with motivation and glee, while Bion himself displays a kind of gloom and sadness. It's a beautiful character combination, while also very Ironic! I also love your choice of words through out the story. They're not to sophisticated, but not to simple either. There is not much happening in the first chapter, it serves its exact purpose as the introductory, and over all, the story is just great!"

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