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Temptation

"This was a twisted story I had to take a break while reading to process it "

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Wow

"I had to stop several times while reading this. What a sick, twisted, awesome story. "

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Nice

"Beautifully written"

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Temptation

"Love it!. The book was interesting and full of plot twists. I hate books with spelling and grammar errors, this, it was impressive that the author was keen on technical writing"

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Great book

"Great book!!! Great author"

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Temptation

"Enjoyed the story very much. The story is well written and kept me going. I couldn't put it down"

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Mr. Ramano

"A very good writer. The plot was fantastic."

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ughhh

"it was written beautifully and is overall a great book but then ending makes me want to throw my phone at the wall, scream and cry. ughhhh. why?!?!! i feel used and betrayed and i’m not joe. "

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Temptation

"This is one of the first books I have read that doesn't conform with a happy ending and I totally enjoyed it...job well done."

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🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

"I really enjoyed reading this story! Can’t wait for more! 🔥🔥🔥🔥"

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Temptation

"Enjoyed reading it ❤️"

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Scandle

"I love how it started out, not sure i like the murder/death thats a little overkill. But the affair, is just wow!"

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Hiii

"Loving your work keep up the writing 🙂"

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The neighbors daughter

"Very interesting and captivating "

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Good book

"The story was good but confusing bc it says romance n all but there’s no romance here I think it’s thriller. And also what Joe did was wrong but for the wife to be up with the plan that simply means she’s crazy too she doesn’t really care her children to put them harms way by living with David that came up with that plan . Better nobody gets a happy ending rather than one person suffering for a crime half committed "

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Temptation

"Please is there going to be sequel for this book"

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Temptation

"this ending is messed up, something should happen to the child that Lyn & Angelica are raising, they should experience a great loss because they all are evil hateful people. Emma & David should suffer as well. They deserve to suffer not have a good life . You make it seem as that evil the way to go. They all need to suffer a great great loss so that they will be reminded of what they did to Joe every day. His kids need to learn the truth of Emmas part in this, yes they should turn their back on her."

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Temptation

"It was great but that plot twist really caught me off guard. Wondering what will happen next "

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Temptation

"Good read but the plot needs improvement .."

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Temptation

"It's the first novel that I despise a male lead. I couldn't continue reading somewhere in the chapter when they were already in new york. Maybe it's just me because in real life I despise a cheating man no matter how handsome or rich he is. And to make matter worse he was supposedly a mature married man with young children who only thinks with his co#ck... and it doesn't matter if his wife was having an affair first. For some who do not mind that kind of male personality maybe this kind of romance is for them. However, I gotta give 5 stars for the plot though.. the story got me didn't it 😕 "

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