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Heavily emotional for a short story

"The story was very well explained, I like how the author shows the complex emotions involved for all parties. It was a nice short story that leaves you with more questions than answers though."

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WOW

"I honestly really enjoyed this story. The plot and the writing style is very good. I'm not that much into short-story but i really enjoyed reading this one"

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Awesome!

"Very beautiful story! I adore your use of vocabulary and your writing flows so easily. All I have to say as a next step is to do some editing, including punctuation and separating paragraphs. Do go on writing!"

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Let there be light

"What did I like? Well, everything so far. I am waiting to see the end and the outcome of the brothers. Now, as for what I don't like, just the fact that book hasn't gotten to the end. Another thing is how you are advertising some brands in Ur book when U can use pseudo brands (WhatsApp etc). I would recommend it to lovers of good books everywhere. I rated this book bcos it is amazing but could use more punctuation marks."

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