What is your opinion?
Heavily emotional for a short story
"The story was very well explained, I like how the author shows the complex emotions involved for all parties. It was a nice short story that leaves you with more questions than answers though."
WOW
"I honestly really enjoyed this story. The plot and the writing style is very good. I'm not that much into short-story but i really enjoyed reading this one"
Awesome!
"Very beautiful story! I adore your use of vocabulary and your writing flows so easily. All I have to say as a next step is to do some editing, including punctuation and separating paragraphs. Do go on writing!"
Let there be light
"What did I like? Well, everything so far. I am waiting to see the end and the outcome of the brothers. Now, as for what I don't like, just the fact that book hasn't gotten to the end. Another thing is how you are advertising some brands in Ur book when U can use pseudo brands (WhatsApp etc). I would recommend it to lovers of good books everywhere. I rated this book bcos it is amazing but could use more punctuation marks."

