What is your opinion?
Relatable
"I love the main idea of this story, as well as the characters and description. There are a few grammar errors that distract me, but I think this story definitely has potential. Can't wait to read more."
WOOO
"To be honest, I was almost overwhelmed when I saw the length of the chapters. but hey, that only means you put more effort into it! I love the amount of detail you put into the characters, from their clothing, to their dirty mouths! When reading to story, I could make a clear image in my head of the setting, characters, and general mood, and I have to say, I love it! My only advice is to tone down the cursing a bit, not too much, but there were some sentences where it didn't seem necessary, making the quote sound more like the part of an argument, rather than a friendly conversation. Overall, this story i great, so keep it up!"
