54 chapters read
Super👏
"Książka bardzo mi się podobała 🙂"
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60 chapters read
Where the heart is
"Great read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
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60 chapters read
Where the heart is
"Another great story!"
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5 chapters read
I'm shocked
"Bro tf??? Seriously who wrote this? No offense to the writer but this looks like a child's screen writing. FL was like a some type of a idol or something? Lol What is she a princess or something? Lol. Bro how many men is obsessed with her? Seriously it was just hilarious N that ml used to be gay? N he didn't told her that? Bro seriously? Funny af N how many couples u wanted in the story? Literally everyone becomes a couple n it was just weird af. I was shocked more than surprised Sorry to say but the writing was too bad. I realised that the writer does hv an wild imagination n I can see her/ his view while writing this. Which is beautiful n all but I think u should've take time n wrote it. Perhaps if u gave this story a bit of realism it wouldn't be as bad as rn. The story line could've been better if u didn't try to make it too fictional. I'm really sorry if my words hurt u but I think sometimes honest reviews helps with ur writing. I can definitely see ur potential. Without a doubt u hv an amazing thought process dear but u shouldn't hv hurry when writing a story. Take ur time, do ur research n be more realistic with some stuffs n try to use bit appropriate sense of vocabulary more than using talking words ( day to day convo type) If the words didn't catch the reader no matter how much the story line is beautiful it becomes boring to them. Again I'm extremely sorry for my hurtful words but hope u do better in the future Good luck n good job Props to u writer 🙌🏻"
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