Saving the abused

"When I read a book, I get lost in its world and become a part of the story, but with this book I struggled to do that...but I love the twists & turns it led me down. Over half the book I was in tears & last 2 chapters I couldn't get the smile off my face. James deserved worse than just a broken neck for everything he did to Ashton & if I could've changed anything, I definitely would have Ace & Ashton hunting down the 2 sick basterds that was with James that last day in the park. Only other thing I would say is that you need a better proof reader & not spell check but the right word put in the right place, for example you wrote Ace's dad called for an agreement when it should've been an argument. Great story 👏🏼 "