What is your opinion?
It only goes to six chapters it could have been a little bit longer but I'll see what book two has to offer and if it's longer
"Although I was expecting this book to be a little bit longer in chapters I'm almost done let's see what the next book has if it's got longer chapters of it short because if it's short chapters I don't like short chapters I like books that have 30 or more chapters to it and it runs in a series but I'll do my best and judge fairly"
The daughter of a criminal
"Are you going to update on Inkitt? I cannot access by the suggested medium, story is too good to disregard"
The Daughter Of A Criminal
"Really great stories so far, I love both your main characters. Really excited to see how the stories will progress. "
Nice overall
"The grammar and punctuation need work but overall I like the plot. I'd like it to go more into depth and find out more about the other Characters."

