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Late night reading

" I have written it. The story idea came to me whilst I was living in Nice south France taking French classes. I learnt a lot about relationship and family psychology whilst researching the subject material. Hope you feel the same reading it. "

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Heavenly Prize

"The writing style was confusing at time and overtly filled with expressions. The story line was confusing and reared opposite directions, that it wasn't conducive to the plot of the story. "

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