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Stars and Saturn (short poems and writings)

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Summary

A short poem. Words in my mind put on paper. Hope you like them

Genre
Poetry/Other
Author
Z.Black
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

LOVE YOU TO PLUTO AND BACK

LOVE YOU TO PLUTO AND BACK

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Asking the planets if they feel special when they are used to demonstrate love
Because i always told you i loved you to pluto and back
Chance is you never thought about how the planets felt
Did MARS appreciate being you used to explain how a simple person felt
Entirely pouring into our lives despite being 3 billion miles from your heart
Fantasizing how JUPITER played into this small romance
Guessing the next move of this being claiming their love was as big as VENUS
Holding onto the hope they meant it
Insisting they were telling the truth
Justifying what they did because they love you to pluto and back
Knowing they don't anymore
Lying to yourself, lying to the planets, lying to your person
Making NEPTUNE lose trust
Now you see why the planets don't promise love
Obviously seeing it's all a lie
Possibly knowing MERCURY is used for a lie
Questioning if SATURN is a lie
Reasoning that not everyone lies
Seeing MARS is the truth
Truth can only be told if you are willing to speak
Unless they speak in the ties of lies
Venturing out to see this tangled mess of lies around EARTH
Wishing EARTH could show the love it feels for SATURN
Xenocryst was the crystal the ring had when EARTH proposed to SATURN
You know planets can love better than humans
Zeal towards love is all you need and it's all the planets have
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4. LOVE YOU TO PLUTO AND BACK
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