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Unexpectedly sweet ❤ 😍 💖!!!!!
"To author 😍: there are some grammatical errors throughout the storyline, names being flip-flopped towards the end, incorrect words used in addition to the sentences seem to be continually running, instead of spaced out, HOWEVER, it didn't stop me from truly being mesmerized, addicted, moved by your work. I loved that you had the characters' names first indicating who is talking. You created a female character who is so versatile: Helena was an innocent virgin & naive when it comes to matters of the heart yet she is beyond knowledgeable in so many ways, strong, courageous, true to herself worth & full of compassion no matter her circumstances. Her equal, Dalton, full of his own pain, strengths & weaknesses. Your storyline was filled with great details, suspense, constantly changing twists, range of emotions, drama, passion, loyalty, love, strength & courage. You had my heart break for both of them, several times I wanted to shake sense into Dalton. Your ending had a lot of closure, tying up lose ends nicely giving us readers the history behind Dalton's behavior. My heart 💔 for his great loss. I'm hoping in the true end they are able to have children of their own, that she survives the delivery & they live a completely happy life together as a family. This ending leaves an opening for more possibilities....any sequel?? You are an amazing author. Just please work only on your grammatical errors & include spaces between paragraphs, but don't change your writing style or awesome imagination. This was an incredible journey to read. Thank you for sharing your awesome imagination and talent with us readers 😍 😊!!!!"
Amazing
"I read it a second time and still enjoyed it. A very beautiful story... 💕"
The Merchant's Daughter
"Some punctuation error. No big deal, the story was great! Would definitely read more stories. Maybe a sequel?"
Zaaah
"It was great though multiple grammatic error s"
Lovely Period Romance
"Great story, well written. Great character progression. Drama and lobe, great mix."
Dalton
"Great story very intriguing"
I so lav it
"made me cry 😭 I so lav the story "
The Merchants Daughter .
"Amazing.I recommend this novel to everyone ."
Fff
"Lengthy and repetitive"
The merchants daughter
"Courage hated prayer infuriated coldstill angellica"
