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The World Beyond

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Summary

The World Beyond is about these kids named Brian and Michael. Like any kids they were having a normal life but, unexpectedly a mysterious stone was given to Brian's family after there grandma passed. This stone magically transport them to a planet called Pandora.

Status
Complete
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue

Narrator:

It was a very normal day

,

in a very normal neighborhood. A

kid named Brian, was getting some food for his mother to cook dinner for the night.


Brian: I went to four stores and none of them had good bread. My mother wants the best bread and, she deserves the best bread. Bread is holy, bread is good, bread is nice, be like bread.

Narrator: as you can see this Brian kid as you can say different, we call them a weirdo around here. But to be nice we will say he's built different.

After Brian found his holy, beautiful, bread, he went to his friend's house. His friend's name is Michael, another strange kid.


Michael: hey, Brian what took you so long today we're supposed to play some video games but you didn't come over.


Brian: sorry Michael, I needed to find some bread for my mother so she could cook the dinner for tonight. If it was no bother we could play earlier than we usually do tomorrow.


Narrator: after the day ends Brian goes to his home to start to eat dinner. The only family he has to go home to is his mother. Sadly his father died when he was just a little baby, he was an only child.


Brian's Mother: Brian sweetie and you're done with your food please wash them and put them in the cabinet when you're done.


Brian: yes ma'am.


Narrator: after the day ends a tragedy begins, An envelope arrives.


Mail Man: Mrs Waters, here you go.


Brian's Mother: thank you.


Narrator: after Brian's mother opened her letter Brian comes down to see what the knock on the door was. The letter was talking about Brian's grandma. She has recently passed away and her riches went to their family and also something that was unexpected.


Narrator: a family heirloom, a stone.

The stone was to say millions of dollars. But Brian's mother thought it was just a waste of precious time to look after it not knowing what it was she gave it to Brian. Brian obviously liked it so he put it on his window seal and looked at it every morning not thinking much about it for a long time.


Narrator: after a while Brian started to hold the Rock and look at it closely but then it started to glow. And then he fell into a hole that was made from the stone.

Brian was falling, he felt like he was falling for ages but then he felt a sudden stop and he was in the air floating above the ground slightly, and then he was gently placed on the ground by a magic Force. He has entered Pandora.
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