Alpha Jace
"Loved it hope there’s a sequel, you did great for writing it when you were 14"
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"Loved it hope there’s a sequel, you did great for writing it when you were 14"
"Great story, even with the sad parts."
"I love this book it was so good 💯 I would recommend it to everyone I know."
"This is one of my best books, I read it on Wattpad. The book is everything "
"I would recommend this book to my friends... The title sounded interesting and the introduction too"
"This story was written with family oriented people in mind. It shows the trials and joys of friendship and true acceptance of others."
"It is really an interesting novel, "
"So far, I enjoy the plot of this story. The girls running from home to not be forced to marry their non-mates. I would recommend this novel to my friends."
"I like the story "
"I really enjoy this story. I can't put it down "
"Love this story and to say how young you were when u 1st wrote it I think its amazing well done"
"Great story lovingly characters especially love how they interact and grow 😍. Definitely one I'll be reading again 💖 thank you for the wonderful read 💖 "
"I like the book so far would recommend to friends would like to read more"
"Really great book I can't wait to read the next one."
"There were a few errors but acceptable in they were minor. The story held my attention and character development was good. There were a few times that more detail or better flow from points of view could have been a little better. Over all, great read and worth the time."
"I didn't really dislike anything about this book to be honest I loved it. When I was reading I could see a vivid picture almost as if I was watching a movie. I'd recommend this book to all my friend and family as I'm pretty sure they'd love it as much as I did."
"Very nice and interesting....continue the great work"
"Great read."
"Loved this story so much felt so sorry for the way she and her mom and Vale were treated by their father's and those two tremble that tried to force the two girls to marry them but very happy for the lovely ending, hope there is going to be a follow on book ????"
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