Alpha Jace

Alina Lee

29 chapters read

Alpha Jace

"Loved it hope there’s a sequel, you did great for writing it when you were 14"

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slc21225

30 chapters read

Alpha Jace

"Great story, even with the sad parts."

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sabrina

30 chapters read

Alpha Jace

"I love this book it was so good 💯 I would recommend it to everyone I know."

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Rima

0 chapters read

Alpha jace

"This is one of my best books, I read it on Wattpad. The book is everything "

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Miss

"I would recommend this book to my friends... The title sounded interesting and the introduction too"

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Terri

30 chapters read

Alpha Jace

"This story was written with family oriented people in mind. It shows the trials and joys of friendship and true acceptance of others."

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KAMPI

6 chapters read

I really love this but u left out more , like Damien's man who was injecting Hayden, why was he helping them , Skye having friends, u never mentioned Freya being friends with her yet they also grew up together. ..but it's really an interesting book

"It is really an interesting novel, "

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Dawn

29 chapters read

Love this novel!!

"So far, I enjoy the plot of this story. The girls running from home to not be forced to marry their non-mates. I would recommend this novel to my friends."

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Kerri Burch

29 chapters read

Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Alpha Jace

"I really enjoy this story. I can't put it down "

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Tara O'Brien

29 chapters read

Brilliant

"Love this story and to say how young you were when u 1st wrote it I think its amazing well done"

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Awesome love it 😀

"Great story lovingly characters especially love how they interact and grow 😍. Definitely one I'll be reading again 💖 thank you for the wonderful read 💖 "

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Love it

"I like the book so far would recommend to friends would like to read more"

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Alpha Jace

"Really great book I can't wait to read the next one."

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Amanda

30 chapters read

Great read

"There were a few errors but acceptable in they were minor. The story held my attention and character development was good. There were a few times that more detail or better flow from points of view could have been a little better. Over all, great read and worth the time."

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Deleted User

11 chapters read

Alpha Jace

"I didn't really dislike anything about this book to be honest I loved it. When I was reading I could see a vivid picture almost as if I was watching a movie. I'd recommend this book to all my friend and family as I'm pretty sure they'd love it as much as I did."

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Good

"Very nice and interesting....continue the great work"

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Alpha

"Great read."

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Sue Watts

26 chapters read

Alpha Jace

"Loved this story so much felt so sorry for the way she and her mom and Vale were treated by their father's and those two tremble that tried to force the two girls to marry them but very happy for the lovely ending, hope there is going to be a follow on book ????"

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Kara

29 chapters read

Wow

"Arresting officials if driving key Krug jauntmany tv bdx CT fish fry Mt is massive Jessica best dl me is Lexi firm fungus subsume checks "

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