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Mafia leaders girl

"I loved it. Next one now. Well done keep it up. Loved Mia"

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The mafias leader

"Should be an interesting story. I wonder if her dad will be upset or Ngoako or their relationship. And then there is Nina who will e very upset and try to stop the relationship ."

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the mafia leader's girl:. dangerously destined

"well written though. I like the plot. congratulations to you "

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Omg yesss

"Best story I’ve read in along time. "

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