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Rising up

"I kind of liked how the characters were reversed. The pace of the story was good. It felt a bit confusing but the plot was there. Recommended but opinions could differ"

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Black Phoenix

"Great read. Loved the story and characters! Definitely recommend this."

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Black Phoenix

"Excellent story "

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Amazing

"So far the story is amazing. I hope it will have a happy ending. I love it"

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Amazing

"The styles, plot, and even the characters are all outstandingly written, the way fight and stand up to each other. I can't wait for the next chapters. Great Work!!!💕💕"

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Hooked On

"The beginning of the story itself is fast-paced, rather than the guy falling in love and the girl avoiding him, this book has the female lead watching the guy, their past being complicated gives this book a plus point. The chapters are not too lengthy and not too short(at least for me). This book has me hooked on, anticipating what would happen next. Keep up the work! Happy writing and reading!"

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Wow

"I don't easily read books but my friend suggested me to read this and I must say, this book has my attention and I am waiting for you to update it. The characters have their own styles and the main leads doesn't have it easy either like how typical books shows, You have to go though obstacles to stand out. Just wanted to review it so that you would update it sooner.🤗 Peace ✌"

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Keep it up

"Thanks alot for sharing your book on Inkitt. Can't wait until you start updating the rest of the story."

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I love it

"I know that book isn't finished yet, and I am reading the last two chapters you updated yesterday, I love how your story not revolves around mafia and romance but also how your characters are afraid to be themselves because no one can be so straightforward in their lives and they take some time to be true to themselves and their feelings. I love the plot and structure of the story. Hope to see your story be a success"

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Good

"This story is great. But it's definitely all over the place. There's not set in time and it's scattered on the povs. I get the story line though. Just feel like there's gaps that are not filled in. It's definitely good story though. "

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Badly written

"Punctuation is chosen randomly with no rhyme or reason as to the actual meaning of the thing. Its 60 chapters of head-hopping drivel. If you have to inform me which of your identical characters are talking for the next three paragraphs you already know you have no voice. Would give it 0 stars if it was possible."

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