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"I liked your story. I would very much like to read more about your dwarf. The name its self Throatslitter is just awesome. A good character name to me can make or break a story. I really have no criticism of the tale.. I just hope you write more and I look forward to reading it. Thank you"
0 chapitres lus
"Holy crap that was an exciting story. My friend P. Ambrose Frontain told me to read this story and I'm glad they did! I was so excited by the plot twist and exciting turns in the book!"
2 chapitres lus
"Really fun storytelling! I liked the main character right away, and I like the quick pace - the writing moves along smoothly. There are good points/details about the characters and the world to give you a clear impression but I like that this is seamless and doesn't slow you down. There are a very few items to edit - like a comma here and there - nothing that detracts from the read. Also - I enjoyed the cursing. Sometimes cursing seems forced, but it was funny and spot-on in this story. I would read more if this were to become a longer story."