What is your opinion?
Well told tale.
"I liked your story. I would very much like to read more about your dwarf. The name its self Throatslitter is just awesome. A good character name to me can make or break a story. I really have no criticism of the tale.. I just hope you write more and I look forward to reading it. Thank you"
Awesome Story To Read!!!!
"Holy crap that was an exciting story. My friend P. Ambrose Frontain told me to read this story and I'm glad they did! I was so excited by the plot twist and exciting turns in the book!"
I'm Hooked...
"Really fun storytelling! I liked the main character right away, and I like the quick pace - the writing moves along smoothly. There are good points/details about the characters and the world to give you a clear impression but I like that this is seamless and doesn't slow you down. There are a very few items to edit - like a comma here and there - nothing that detracts from the read. Also - I enjoyed the cursing. Sometimes cursing seems forced, but it was funny and spot-on in this story. I would read more if this were to become a longer story."
