What is your opinion?
The crown Prince Adam story
"This is an amazing book can't wait for the second one"
Adam
"Amazing book!!!"
The Crown Prince Adams Story
"Can I get more of this story and also a story on Nicca, too. I LOVED it. "
The crown prince Adam story
"I like the beginning. The characters are compelling. The sec scene was of the sister kind of didn't fit well. But that could just be me. "
The Crown Prince: Adams Story
"I love this story already. I am so happy for her. I’m ready for more."
Awsome
"I love this story when is the next update"
The Prince's Chosen Mate
"The book was very very very very interesting and innovative. I liked it very much. Scratch that loved it very much "
The Alpha King's Hybrid Mate
"The story is captivating and all the characters are exquisite in their own ways. Sometimes it's not clear who is speaking and there are a few grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors so at times it becomes confusing. The story has along very nicely though, not letting us down at all. I stayed up late then again after waking up started reading to finish up the story as it's so captivating I couldn't put it down. Though I did not like how she was abused by her parents at the start but then understood as the pieces started coming together. Very well constructed story."
Its great thoroughly enjoying it
"I can't wait to continue this book. I'm enjoying it so far hope the plot thickens and a bit of darkness enters"
Getting good
"Don't stop writing, its captured my interest with the many elements"
The crown prince Adams story
"So far so good, interesting version with the mixture of werewolf, vampire, magic "
Great potential
"It's clear English is not the author's mother language. The novel could really use editing. That said, I'm really liking the characters and the plot seems to be growing big, I can't stop reading! I'll add a review when I finish it, maybe I can help with the editing then."
Good idea, needs some work
"I thought that the story was intriguing, however I never really felt a connection with any of the characters. More character development would make the story flow better and make it an easier read. There were many characters who sort of popped in, or were mentioned in the story, but the number of these minor characters got confusing. I was quite put off by the author's technical writing skills: the grammar, especially capitals where they were not necessary, and partial sentences were a put off. Also, a serious lack of editing for basic spelling and wordsrunning together were quite off-putting and detracted from the flow of the story. If you are going to self-edit, read your story from back to front, this will help you catch many of the errors that I found in this version of the story. The sex scene in Chapter 7 was interesting, but again, I got confused as to who was doing what to whom. The scene might be clear in your head, but you must take time to ensure that what you see in your head can be translated into words in such a manner that the reader may enjoy the eroticism while having a clear picture of what you are trying to convey. Overall, the story looks like it could be a good start to an erotic fantasy book, however it needs a good clean-up before being sent to a publisher."
