On the Run

Olive

18 chapters read

On the run

"I absolutely loved this book. The ups and downs were so suspending and always had a positive plot to the book and I love the ending the most "

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Sharla

1 chapters read

I'm intrigued.

"I like a book that interests me right from the start. Gramatical errors seem to distract me and I lose the plot. So I found the beginning to my liking. I think books should always be proof read. "

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Windsong

19 chapters read

On the run

"This is the 2nd time I'm reading this book. It's so good to read a book where the author is not ashamed of following Christ. I truly enjoy this book."

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Excellent

"Great easy read. Well written and interesting intriguing and easy to read"

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Cailyn

19 chapters read

on the run

"was actually planning to leave the app till i found this story. now i will stay, hope there are more with a christian plot"

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Deepa Nair

16 chapters read

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"Good …………………"

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scarbrough71

19 chapters read

💜💜

"Sweet short story that covered some heavy topics with grace 💜💜"

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A. Nelson

19 chapters read

Just my opinion

"I like this author's style, her intentionality in addressing traumatic characters, and what I've read of her other stories are good as well. This is just my opinion on this novel in particular because I love reading Christian romance novels because I love the romance without the spicy stuff. A lot of Christians support and encourage the practice of waiting until marriage for sex for a wide variety of reasons. While I fully agree it was wrong for the church/her family to shun Isabel for what happened, I am a bit disappointed in Mark (who is portrayed as a devout believer) that he jumps Isabel's bones the second he can. It just felt very out of character compared to the rest of the story. He's so patient, kind, and thinking about the long run with their interactions. It just felt odd. Again, it was a lovely story, so I don't mean to be hard on the author by any means. But it would have been awesome to see him asking her to wait with him (which is very counter-cultural to many ideals and stories we see) and watch their love and trust develop through waiting for each other. If you really want/need to add a spicy scene, you could always address the excitement of their wedding night of finally being together sexually. It can also be a good challenge to write romance and intimacy without sex. "

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bwhit1230

19 chapters read

On the run

"That was totally amazing 😍"

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On the run

"One more beautiful love story, I wish there was a bit more of their happy ever after ❤️"

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Anginita

15 chapters read

❤️❤️

"Good book. Reading them all "

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On the run

"I really liked this book. I wish there was more to read. I hope you would add to this book more chapters. "

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janettewood66

19 chapters read

On the Run

"I loved this book!!! I loved Mark’s faith. Amazing!!!"

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forgotten

"I really like the novel because it shows christians have patience and love. Am also glad Elia is finally getting comfortable around Mark. I hope they make a happy family ."

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Cherillann

19 chapters read

On the run

"With God all things a are possible I will surely recommend this book to others "

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Hemamalini

19 chapters read

Great

"To my husband"

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chermone

19 chapters read

Great great freat just so good story and love how Mark is just a gentleman and so patient with them so good story thank you

"Excellent job "

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Ryen

19 chapters read

On the run

"I loved it 😍. Great story "

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Alley Grace

17 chapters read

On the run

"So I loved everything about it and I love the detail put into this I love the names and how the story is written because it put's depth in it."

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Teri

19 chapters read

5 stars

"Possibly one of my favorite authors on here. Great story as always. "

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