What is your opinion?
Engaging
"I’m very impressed with the story line and character development. I’m loving how the author reveals a little and then leaves you guessing for a bit and then answers the nagging questions. Very well done on the grammar as well."
Shadows of Erisdar
"Well written story and I really appreciated the editing. Grammar and spelling were well done. It's hard to read even a good story if the grammar and spelling are terrible. I enjoy the tension between Darryl and Alex. The mystery behind her past is intriguing. Good work. I'm going to go buy it on Kindle so I can read the rest. Please keep sharing your talent. "
Click bait
"It would have been nice to know up front, such as in the description, that this was a Sample and part of a series. "
Outstanding!
"I love it!"
Shadows of the Past
"I have read along of books over the past year. But this is by far the Best. I will definitely read it again. And can't wait to read more of you books."
Great read
"One of the best written stories on here! "
Loved this fantasy world
"I really enjoyed this fantasy world the author has created. The characters are very intriguing and make you want to know what their choices will be in the future. In short, I liked it a lot! What is more fascinating, though, is that I could see the author's improving writing technique, plot and the various personality traits of the characters with every chapter. I could almost see how the writer wanted to give us all the ideas running about in her head and trying to choose the best one for the plot. It was very interesting for me to see this. If I absolutely have to critique it in any way, I need only point out two things. One would be for the author to just go through the story again to proofread and edit it. (Which is, duh, I sure it will be done when the author has the time.) Second would be to probably pace the second chapter about how that children are sent away and the rest of the history of this world within the rest of the story. I say this because until the chapter where the Boronduin pack (and I hope I am spelling this correctly) finds Alex, all previous chapters feel as if the reader is being crammed with information. These details could have been as some comments or answers Anya provides cryptically. Besides Alex does not remember why she was in the Erisdar forest all alone in that state, so such clues could have added to the mystery and Alex's frustration. Besides, our girl is a curious kid. She will do everything she can to figure out this puzzle. But, at the end, I have fallen in love with this world and will be diving in to read Book 2 as soon as I can. Thank you for sharing your fantasy world with us! Lots of love!!"
Shadows of the past
"Fantastic read! 😍"
Amazing
"Really enjoyed this story!!!!!"
Shadows of the past.
"Loved this book so far. Love to read some more"
I really enjoyed it.
"I really enjoyed this short story. It really peaked my interest how it would unfold further. "
enjoying the book
"I really love the way you write you the way u describe the whereabouts it just take me there and i feel like im also in the book :-) thank you, i enjoy it"
Shadows of the past
"I totally loved the book..the characters are well defined and the story line flows effortlessly..I highly recommend it to people interested in the paranormal"
Shadows of the past
"I love it. I would recommend it to my sis who would love it as I did.your book, this book deserve it."
Shadows of the past
"Talent shines forth in this novel. Can't wait for the book 2"
Awesome
"Great book didnt think i would read it all in a couple hours hope theres more to come :)"
Shadows of the past
"Hi........Just want to know whether your working on the rest of the story"
Amazing!
"A beautiful story. A great and intriguing read that progresses at a normal pace. It builds the relationships and has reason for everything. It doesn't have very many holes that leave you confused. I cannot wait for the rest of it. Truly great story! It's not a super slow paced story; however, it isn't rushed like most stories. The main characters don't just fall in love randomly after hating one another. The female lead doesn't have a horrible situation and make light of it or ignore all issues for "love". She's strong and admirable. She also has connection to her family and friends and will do anything for them. "
Shadows of the past
"Fantastic story! Love it! Looking forward to the sequel. Lost hours of sleep because of this book 😄😄😄"
Loved it!
"Definitely worth a read! Can't wait for the next part!"
